ametaznes ([info]ametaznes) wrote,
@ 2008-06-10 21:29:00
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Sesame Leaves (rwp #30)
when someone drives over the sewer lid
outside my window, it makes a knocking sound -
a hollow metallic introduction
someone is beckoning the street
make room for me in your house, Daejam
i'm coming in.

if i heard such a knock and such a cry,
i'd make them more than welcome here in mine.
a dirty kitchen, an oscillating fan
what more could they want?
a little first-pancake homemade gimbap
and we're sorted.

i've almost forgotten the smell of laundry
and how to bake and how to drive a car
but i eat green things and sew clothing -
i've made one skirt -
so i think i'll have some things to take
back with me.

from one street to another, hollow out your world
and make a place for me to fit back into mine
somehow i will make this broken puzzle
fit together without corners
i'll hem the edges with teal string, and put it
back in the box.



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Sesame Leaves
[info]disorder1313.wordpress.com
2008-06-10 02:21 pm UTC (link)
I really like the way you take the sound in the street and personalize it. "Hollow metallic introduction" is a great line.

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[info]mariacristina.wordpress.com
2008-06-10 02:47 pm UTC (link)
I like the idea of the home-made world the narrator inhabits, and seems to be just fine with forgetting some things that used to be normal, and making up others to make do. It's a world I almost recognize, but not quite, maybe a metaphor of how we view each other. Great poem, I really like it.

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